All cars that burns fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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Automobiles that
uses
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use
fossil
fuel
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should be prohibited
by
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from
using modern vehicles that
runs
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run
on batteries or solar panels. I totally agree with
this
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because it diminish natural resources and pollute the environment. Massive use of fossil
fuel
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on
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in
for
vehicles will lead to diminish natural resources. In today's modern
world everyone
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world, everyone
have four wheelers to gallivant from one place to another.
vehicles
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Vehicles
are necessary means of transport for individuals to migrate. Abundant vehicles needs large amount of
fuel
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which can lead to decrease in natural resources which will effect on imminent generation. A good example of
this
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is, in past era coal are used in train to travel so large amount of coal has been used in
past
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the past
now coal are imminent danger of extinction in natural resources. Usage of
fuel
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in automobiles effects environment. Toxic
gaseous
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gases
gasses
that are released from vehicles involve in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
and cause health issues for the society.
these
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These
toxic gases disturb the equivalent
gaseous
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gasses
present in the air. The best example for
this
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is, the toxic gas named as carbon
monoxide which
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monoxide, which
are released from automobile involves in
air
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the air
and cause damage to ozone layer which protect
human being
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human beings
the human being
from
uv
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UV
rays. The depletion of ozone layer effects on humans. In conclusion, Vehicles that
runs
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run
on batteries should be used
instead
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of automobile that burns fossil
fuel
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because it destroy natural resources and perish the purity of the environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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