Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the fast-moving and

digitized modern

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the digitized modern world

world

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popularity

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the popularity

of online newspapers is steadily accelerating. I strongly believe that the popularization of digital newspapers will soon overshadow the viability of traditional newspapers. I have strong reasons to believe the same, since the popularity of traditional newspapers are decelerating. Traditional newspapers are characterized by the tedious works of editing, printing and distributing, which I believe limits the circulation and exposure to a wider audience.

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, traditional newspapers are geographically limited, failing to address the needs of modern news seekers. Apparently, it is the online newspapers which have

quench

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quenched

the thirst of instant news seekers, facilitating access to local as well as globally prestigious newspapers like the BBC, New York Times and the Wall Street Journals. Online newspapers provide a personalized experience by organizing contents that match the perspective of individual readers. It

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provides an opportunity to compare and analyse the same news across different platforms. Albeit, the warmth of holding a traditional newspaper cannot be experienced through online newspapers, the advantages of online newspapers far outweighs that of the traditional newspapers. In

this

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modern

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of advanced technology and communication, the ubiquity of

internet

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the internet

as well as the availability of internet devices, have boosted the popularity of online newspapers to an extent that the concept of purchasing and reading a traditional newspaper is viewed by many as old-fashioned. Online platforms meet the demand of busy and fast moving

world

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of today by providing instant updates. Online news media enable people to get hold of new developments across the

world

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within a fraction of

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second

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a second

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, which the traditional newspaper fails to address. In conclusion, I have faith that the online

media will

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media, will

drive the traditional newspapers out of the circulation in the near future.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Task 2: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some places lod age is valued,while in other cultures youth is considered more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pulpils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a school uniform?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?