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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism is undeniably
essential element
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an essential element
 to help with the economic growth of a nation. There are drawbacks on
this
matter in which will
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matter which will
 be discussed
on
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in
this
 essay. Every country has its won tourist spots, national landmarks, historic sites and beautiful scenery to be proud of. In line with
this
, it attracts tourists,
such
 as locals or even foreigners as well. In
such
 view, the government will earn enormous amount which will help to boost its economy. As long as visitors are satisfied they will keep coming back and relatively promote it to their family and friends. In line with that, the circulation or flow of visitors will continue. All of the needed services of the tourist will be
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
 for that country.
Therefore
, not only in the attractions that the government will earn, but it will provide
also
 jobs for the locals
such
 as, being tour guide or open up businesses for souvenirs.
On the contrary
, there are adverse effects
on
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of
this
 system.
Firstly
, visitors tend to travel
in
particular time frame
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a particular time frame
particular time frames
,
for instance
 if it is summertime.
Mass number
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The mass number
 of tourists can cause disorganization and can sometimes damage the attraction itself. A good example for
this
 is the volume of waste
product
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produced
. One study of the Department of Environment shows that the coliform level
reach
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reaches
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 peak due to
uncontrolled number
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an uncontrolled number
 of tourists who visited the island of Boracay.
Secondly peace and order
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Secondly, peace and order
The secondly peace and order
The secondly peace and order The secondly peace and order
willb
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
 be compromised. A huge number of
tourist
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tourists
attracts
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attract
 burglars and thieves. To sum it up, both sides have their
advantage
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advantages
 and disadvantages. I strongly agree that tourism really can help
bosst
increase
boost
bust
 one's economy.
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In
 that instance, maintenance and organisation must be observed. It is like hitting 2 birds with 1 stone.

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