Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Other believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are spilt opinion regarding, some human beings believe that government should payoff money on metros. Whereas, some state that there should be more expenditure into development of new roads.

Therefore ahead

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Therefore, ahead

of my position both sides must be discussed. Examining the former opinion, the primary argument that supporters put forward is that government should invest money on railways as it is

convient mode

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a convenient mode

convenient mode

of transport.

This

is because it helps raw materials to transport from one place to another easily.

In addition

, they

also

believe that it is that it saves time as well as becomes

easily

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easy

for people to reach their destination without wasting petrol.

For instance

: The local metro

that is

running in Mumbai and Delhi. It is world's longest railway network. On

contrary

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the contrary

, those who have faith in the latter view have their own arguments.

To begin

with, they explain that there should be more expenditure into building new roads because the car can move smoothly and can avoid accidents.

Besides

this

, there is another reason

that

is it consumes

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consumes it

is it consuming

is it consumes

time of

individual

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the individual

an individual

.

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In fact

, it could

even not lead

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not even lead

to traffic congestion if there no proper roads so it could even lead to delay in work.

For

instance if

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instance, if

Mr. Janam has

meeting

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met

at 10am. So it is compulsory for him to reach on time but due to traffic or bad conditions of

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roads

the road

. He reached at 11am. So

then

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the meeting

was cancelled it could

has

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have

lead to

big loss

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big losses

a big loss

. It can in turn lead to a situation of depression

also

. To conclude and give my opinion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

choose my position,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

confidentially bolster the latter view.

Although

just investing

can not

can not

cannot

improve the situation, but implementing it can reap long term benefits.