Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

Many people

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believe

believed

that economic growth is the only factor for

nation

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success whereas

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success, whereas

few has different views. While economic development is a crucial thing, I believe that other factors are

also

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very vital in the contribution of

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country's progress

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the country's progress

. There are some important points in the success of the

country

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in terms of economic development.

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, employment rate plays a major factor.

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, every

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prefer

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prefers

to provide a variety of job options to people and

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now-a-days employment is increasing alarmingly across the world.

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, Canada

offering

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offers

is offering

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a wide range

of opportunities

to

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for

many individual and it

is indirectly growing

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has indirectly grown

its economy.

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, many countries are dependent on imports and exports. Here, they establish

strong connection

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a strong connection

strong connections

with neighbouring countries. As shown as, USA is considered as one of the richest

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in the world because of its economic expansion.

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, I personally believe that others factors

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also plays

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also play

an important role in the

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's growth apart from economic development.

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, the health sector is treated as an

essiential

absolutely necessary; vitally necessary

essential

part.

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, every

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looks for their citizens to be healthy and active.

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, Italy and USA especially grows their revenue by health and becomes a key to

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's advancement.

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, environment can

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be

judge

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judged

as essential in the evolution of

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country

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the country

.

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, it increases revenue and growth by tourist activities. To illustrate, Switzerland is best environment place across the

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globe, according

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the Environmental Performance Index

. To Conclude, Economic advancement is just one measure

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of

success. Every

nation

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should even consider other norms in perspective of health and environment to achieve huge victory.