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Band 6.5

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologise • describe what action you will take

#neighbours #noise #apologise #action
Dear Sarah, Hope you are doing great. I’m writing
this
 letter to explain
you
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 about the annoying noise from my home and of course, I want to apologize for that. The sound which you have been listening
was
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 of my nephew, who is autistic. Autism is a medical condition, which makes people behave abnormally. When they get high, they will create noise and will throw the objects. His mother had to go to an urgent meeting, that’s why she left him with us for a day. I’m sincerely apologising on behalf of him.
However
, we find him gifted. Kindly forgive him for the noise. We will make sure that
this
 won’t be repeated
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 the following days.
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, he is going back by today’s evening flight, which is about 5.30 pm. So, there will not be any annoyance hereafter. Thanks for the understanding Your’s faithfully Silpa

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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