The climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

I attended a meeting at the work in the past, and I want to talk about it. The lecturers who have worked
for
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in
the job a long time, longer than many research
asistants
a person who contributes to the fulfillment of a need or furtherance of an effort or purpose
assistants
assistant
decided to start a weekly programme on human rights, and they decided to organise a meeting to talk
on
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about
it before starting it. Me and other research assistants were invited to join it. They gave us some briefs about how it will work, how long it will take, who will be
attended
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attending
as a speaker. They
also
asked us for an opinion about how we think about the
organisation
, how the
organisation
can be better, which cases, articles or visual materials can be used during the
organisation
, and we
asked
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have asked
for some time. Later, we gave them some feedbacks, and we recommended some articles and other materials that may be useful for the
organisation
, and asked them to have a look at these. Roughly speaking, I think there are two types of meetings; formal ones and informal ones. You as
a
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an
employee, as a student can be invited to join a formal meeting
in
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with
business, school, but there are
also
informal meetings.
For example
, if friends from high school decided to organise a meeting to remember
old days
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the old days
, it
also
can be considered a meeting, but
this
would
be informal one
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be an informal one
. If we are talking about meetings that take place in workplaces,
yes most
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yes, most
of people don't like those because they are boring and attenders are generally are not willing to join those; they have to do it. I think in some meeting, some very
imporant
of great significance or value
important
topics for some can be
talked
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talkative
, and if those people don't want to attend meetings, they will miss the chance to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
what is talked, and
this
may lead to miss an
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
. World leaders occasionally gather at meetings because there are many international problems that need to be solved. World leaders should gather at one point and discuss those problems to reach common solutions. They are more likely to have a busy schedule because they are dealing with many issues. It would
therefore
be hard to find a meeting time that suits for each world leader. I think more and more we are facing new international issues, so it is likely that world leaders will need to meet on
more frequent basis
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a more frequent basis
to discuss those and meet on common ground for those.
However
,
on the other hand
, I don't think world leaders will need to meet literally. Thanks to internet and improved internet security, some meeting can be held online

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