Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As is true that studying at educational institutions Can improve both
scientific
and moral perspectives Of a person and it can be beneficial to allow more people Correct article usage
the scientific
entering
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to enter
universities
. So, I believe that it,
might be very effective Remove the comma
apply
letting
everyone gain university courses; but in some Change the verb form
to let
cases
it might not be that Add a comma
cases,
much
useful. Fix the agreement mistake
apply
To begin
, those people who attended the
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apply
universities
with a weak background of academic capability,
Might become very successful even though they Remove the comma
apply
had
not Verb problem
did
strong
knowledge. But being surrounded by Scientific spaces, Add a missing verb
have strong
it
can lead them to something valuable. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Although
these types cannot be matched with those who entered the universities
with a
great academic Remove the article
apply
ability
, yet
it is worth Correct word choice
apply
to give
them chances to experiment Change the verb form
giving
their
intelligence. Change preposition
with their
On the other hand
, those ones
who attended the Correct pronoun usage
apply
universities
with a stable academic ability
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abilities
,
might be Unpleasant with the other the ones who have a weaker education, because they may believe that Remove the comma
apply
this
combination of abilities causes a problem to learn
as it might be not having a good balance In class and those who came with good Change preposition
in learning
ability
Do not use the necessary of universities
as it should be. In addition
, allowing men and women study
without Fix the infinitive
to study
a
proof of their Remove the article
apply
ability
to do so, might result in a lot of resources being wasted. The reason for this
is that third level
education is expensive, costing up to $12,000 per year in the UK, Add a hyphen
third-level
for instance
. If a student picks an area of study and is then
unable to complete it because he finds it difficult, a lot of money, which could have been channelled to other purposes, would have been wasted. In conclusion, some people believe that everyone should be admitted into university academic programs, irrespective of how they have performed academically in the past. This
should be experienced over times
And considered the feedback to decide whether it is good to have Fix the agreement mistake
time
this
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion