What are the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone.

In
cotemporary era
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the contemporary era
contemporary era
, most of the population of the world is bombarded with the technology
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which is booming by leaps and bounds and maximum number of
pelople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
spend their
optimul
most desirable possible under a restriction expressed or implied
optimal
optimum
time to using it.
This
essay will narrate the
marits
be worthy or deserving
merits
and
demarits
a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerits
of the using mobile in
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paragraph. On the one hand
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all
genrations
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generations
are used to with the mobile phone
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children
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younger
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older individuals. There are some advantages of mobile using
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one of the advantages is mankinds can carry the phone with them anywhere
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use it anytime
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it helps people in many ways like to use social media applications
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read books
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chat with others
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use as a television to watch movies for an instance
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when they
feel
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felt
bored at that time people are using mobile to get an entertainment.
Furthermore
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peoples can learn their academic lessons through the android mobile phone at anytime anywhere. So these are the benefits of mobile.
On the other hand
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there are some disadvantages
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is it affects physical y-effects
eyesmas
well as mentally - radiation effect the mind. People are becoming lazy children are become go astray and disobeying
also
spent more time to play mobile games rather than study, watch adult videos and do some cyber crime. Not only effects physically, mentally, but
also
birds for an example
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due to radiation of mobile towers in India
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many sparrows die out and decrease the number of birds. To recapitulate
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mobile has advantages - it makes life easier vis-a-vis past
also
disadvantages - affect the mind
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eyes and birds.
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