The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck County at different times of the year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.
The table below demonstrates various bird species like
the
Bluebirds, Cardinals, Crows, Mockingbirds, etc. Observed in Correct article usage
apply
the
Woodchuck county in Correct article usage
apply
winter
and summer. According to
the table, the migration scheme of eight different bird species monitored
. At the first point, The table facilitates the Add a missing verb
was monitored
birds
' instinctive tendency to migrate in accordance with weather condition
which is imperative for their nesting and breeding. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
Although
the majority of birds
prefer to migrate at
warmer seasons, some Change preposition
in
birds
like Cardinals, Crows, Juncos, and Woodpeckers tend to migrate in winter
either. In particular
, the Juncos are the only birds
among
the list Change preposition
on
those
only migrate in Correct pronoun usage
that
winter
, while
the Bluebirds follow reverse
order. Correct article usage
the reverse
Nevertheless
, the Mockingbirds, Orioles, Vireos
Correct word choice
and Vireos
fascinating
favourable conditions and naturally desire Warmer places for raising their young. As a conclusion, Add a missing verb
have fascinating
while
some species like Mockingbirds only migrate in summer, a minority (Cardinals for instance
) longing
to trip Replace the word
long
at
Change preposition
in
winter
too. It might be due to
the air condition of their former habitat, which is much colder than the destination. However
, it remains a vague matter because the innate features of the birds
should also
be grafted onto this
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, birds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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