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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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I think immigration is very significant for people. If anyone has special skills move to
rich country
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rich countries
a rich country
, the can provide
to
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for
 him all ways and tools to be successful. He or she will have the ability to create many valuable inventions to the global society.
as
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As
 the best education and academic systems in rich countries, and they
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 give
free caring
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free, caring
 packages to talented people, due to many of them do a lot of effort to move to these countries.
For instance
,
United state
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the United States
United States
took hundred
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took a hundred
 students from Egypt
last
 year, and ministry of education
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they're
 told the Egyptian
government he
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government, he
 will prepare them to be engineers and doctors in the future.
In addition
 to that, the wealthy countries give the highest salaries in the following fields engineering, programming and medical, and it is a very important reason to move to these countries.
as
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As
 they did not earn enough money in their pauper countries for their family's needs.
Furthermore
, they have dreams to enhance their financial statement. As an example we have here in Egypt our famous engineer Mr. Ahmed Hossam
,
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,
 he moved to Canada before ten years, now he back and open one of the biggest computer companies in Cairo. To sum up, there are many benefits
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of
 immigration, and global society should collaborate and cooperate to increase it. I think that scientists can provide us with medicines if they have big laps and tools which are in rich countries.
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The
 same issue for engineers can give us amazing resolutions for many problems as road accidents if they educate well in international universities.
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