More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree?

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I think immigration is very significant for people. If anyone has special skills move to
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him all ways and tools to be successful. He or she will have the ability to create many valuable inventions to the global society.
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the best education and academic systems in rich countries, and they
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packages to talented people, due to many of them do a lot of effort to move to these countries.
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the United States
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took a hundred
students from Egypt
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will prepare them to be engineers and doctors in the future.
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to that, the wealthy countries give the highest salaries in the following fields engineering, programming and medical, and it is a very important reason to move to these countries.
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they did not earn enough money in their pauper countries for their family's needs.
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immigration, and global society should collaborate and cooperate to increase it. I think that scientists can provide us with medicines if they have big laps and tools which are in rich countries.
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same issue for engineers can give us amazing resolutions for many problems as road accidents if they educate well in international universities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Globalization
  • Skilled workforce
  • Socioeconomic growth
  • Economic disparity
  • Specialist areas
  • Free market of skills
  • Immigration policies
  • Labor market
  • Talent attraction
  • Professional development
  • Remittances
  • Economic incentives
  • Knowledge transfer
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