Nowadays more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. Is this a good or a band trend?

wearing
Suggestion
Wearing
trending attire by individuals has become extremely popular as
compare
Suggestion
compared
comparatively
comparable
to yesteryears.It seems to me a positive trend. To
bgin
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
bargain
with, carrying
latst
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
fashion style create confidence among people
,
Accept space
,
especially youngsters.By
this
, I mean At present, more people are migrating to developed countries to experience better living standard. During
such
relocation they tend to wear latest fashionable clothes to be one among the society, and to gain confidence in their work locations.
In addition
, it is
also
considered as a self-esteem factor for many people to follow latest clothed while attending public and private ceremonies.
For instance
, my friend went to Canada as part of
work location transfer
Suggestion
the work location transfer
a work location transfer
, after 5 years I could see a radical change in his clothing style, and he said
this
change is needed to socialize with
this neighbours
Suggestion
these neighbours
this neighbour
, friends and colleagues. But some people suggest
this
transformation would hamper the native clothing style is various ways.
Hence
, it
is believe
Suggestion
is believed
wearing latest fashionable clothes is a need to gain confidence and to be part of the local community.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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