Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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I like to face challenge in real world. My motto in life is hard working. I always belief myself and work on perseverance to boost my confidence. I want to build my carrier in research work and teaching.
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: Islamic University, Bangladesh. Department : Applied Physics, Electronics & Communication Engineering Duration : 1
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: 2011 (Held in 2012) Bachelor of Science (Hon’s)
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: Islamic University, Bangladesh. Department : Applied Physics, Electronics & Communication Engineering Duration : 4 Years
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: 2010 (Held in 2011) Higher Secondary Certificate
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: 2004 PROJECT WORK: For the partial fulfillment of B.Sc(Hons) Degree, I have accomplished a project on “Audio Signal Modulation (FM, AM, PM) and Demodulation Using MATLAB”. LANGUAGE PROFICIENCY: 1.Excellent reading, writing & speaking skills in both English & Bengali 2.English Language Proficiency Certified.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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