More students are travelling abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

There are numerous students are wandering abroad for advanced education in recent years. Whereas some people opine that the positive experience will outweigh the p

robems,

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

others argue that there are several problems associated with it. I believe that the advantages of a

study

abroad exceed the drawbacks.

First

of all, studying abroad is m

arvelous

extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier

marvellous

because you can m

eat

a meeting at which a number of athletic contests are held

meet

and deal with a lot of persons outside your countries. You

also

have o

pportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

opportunities

to learn something that cannot be obtained conveniently in your country.

For instance

, my student can learn about Data Science, which cannot be attained in Indonesia. Yet, you can be feeling lonely and homesickness from the time. As e

xample,

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an example

I have had

this

impression when I was living in Bandung for my undergraduate

study

.

On the other hand

, studying abroad can be m

ajor hazard

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a major hazard

major hazardous

major hazarded

if we can control, manage ourselves and accomplish some problems especially in fundamental aspects.

Moreover

, it will be g

rieve

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grieved

if we are not an independent person who hang down from others. Due to

this

fact, some of my undergraduate colleagues quite frustration when they have a problem regarding t

o do

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doing

some assignment, clean their flat and how to manage their time, especially when they are playing online games. To sum up my idea above, I reaffirmed that the advantages of

study

abroad experience outweigh the deficiency emerge from

study

abroad. Obviously, it can only be perceived if we can be independent person, can control ourselves, and be mature to solve the problems regarding fundamental aspects.