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These days most people prefer not to leave in rural areas. Task: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in rural areas?

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This
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 trend is certainly not a new phenomenon that myriad people abandon their villages and come to the cities. Below,
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 essay will suggest that the abundance of natural resources is the primary advantage of living in the
countryside
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 and the scarcity of career options is the main drawback. It is common knowledge that the
life
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 in the
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 is quite high with its environmental awareness.To be more explicit, the abundance of natural resources
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 as land, wildlife, forestry and water bodies means that people can become self-sufficient smallholders. If the parents are farmers, children learn methods of farming
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 as crop rotation and irrigation, and generally become more in tune with the natural world
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.
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, a recent research showed that the 59% population of country dwellers are farmers. Despite these advantages, the
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the countryside
is rather a backwater, with limited career options than a city. To be more accurate, the lack of jobs for both parents and children makes their
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 more difficult, resulting in rural unemployment, rural poverty and rural depopulation in the worst cases.
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, a recent survey showed that the 60% of rural depopulation caused by lack of jobs and works. In conclusion, the
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ountryside
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the countryside
is quite high with the environmental awareness, but the limit of works makes peoples'
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 difficult.

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