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With the rise of ebooks comes the decline of paperbacks. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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The
ivention
the creation of something in the mind
invention
 of computers and technologies have changed the way of reading in recent years by introducing ebooks and that has lead to a situation of
obseletion
 of paperbacks
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 A few people take
this
 in a positive way and others contradict
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 In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 has equal positives and negatives
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Firstly
, the ebooks
change
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changes
 the way our reading practices.
Instead
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 of relying on paperbacks
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we
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We
 just make use of our electronic gadgets and read our favourite articles and stories.
This
 change of approach to our reading methods saves time and energy required for carrying the books and mitigates the effort required to handle the books.
For example
, due to the invention of ebooks we can access various types of books we like to read at anywhere and
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at
anytime
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any time
. Whereas, in olden days
this
 was not the case.
Secondly
, some people feel that they have lost the feeling of reading and the better comprehension that paperback offers. Even though the ebooks contain the same content of matter as the real paperback does
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 Eventually, it's all about the pleasure and satisfaction that a real paperback gives
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Moreover reading
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Moreover, reading
 in the digital screens for a prolonged period of time
imapairs
make worse or less effective
impairs
 our eye sight to
greater extent
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a greater extent
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 In conclusion
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 both ebooks and paperbacks
has
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have
 their own advantages and disadvantages
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 so it is
upto
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up to
 personal preferences
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However
, people have their own privilege to choose their method of
study depending
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study, depending
 on their circumstances and needs
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