Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your experience.

To start my essay I should say that there is

different side

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a different side

of views about

retirement

. Some people believe that, working should stop after reaching

retirement

age

somehow the others think completely different. They believe that, the job should be continued after the

retirement

age

. In

this

essay I am going to discuss about

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different sides

a different side

of the views. To continue the

work

after the

retirement

age

, has some positive and negative points. In my opinion, working should be continued due to prevent from psychological problems

such

as depression, being lazy by always staying at home, …. The most important part is that you feel much better by earning money

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with

from

your own after

retirement

age

.

Then

you have a sense of responsibilities that you still have time to be

alive

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alive, however

however

, you can run your own business and do whatever you want to do. By the way you are not going to be alone and you can be much happier than before.

For instance

, when you catch up

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at

work

or run a business after the

retirement

age you

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age, you

should be contacted

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by

more people in your job. My father has been retired after he reached the

age but

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age, but

he continued his job and not only he is making more money than

before but

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before, but

also

he has more sense of

humor

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humour

honour

due to his

work

. Since he got retired, he got sick because of staying at home and nothing to do.

However some

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However, some

others think completely different. They think that people after reaching the

retirement

age

have to stay at home and not working,

also

they think that they have worked enough and now is the time to rest.

Although

the people who have been retired can access the salary from the government, so they are not having any problems. Those people can make more friends as we can see the elderlies which are gathering in the parks and telling the stories of their life and laughing and singing. To sum up I respect both

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sides

of the views in spite of having each pros and cons, but I myself prefer to continue my

work

after I reach the

retirement

age

.