IELTS Writing Practice. One of the major problems that face today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory houses for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the world

population

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h

ave been increasing

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has been increasing

is increasing

was increasing

has increased

continuously over the past decades in terms of number as well as its density, which

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leads to overcrowding in mega and small cities.

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, residential spaces for citizens have been reduced due to expanded urbanization and office

space

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. The recessed

space

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for r

esidential

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residents

residing has given a pressure to governments around the globe as it should find ways to mitigate or ease

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looming issue to help its people find p

roper living

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a proper living space

space

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with affordable price of accommodation amidst its increased

population

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. There are many factors contributing to the problem of creating enough satisfactory housing as followings:

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, continuously increasing of

population

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,

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, in the region of Asia or in the continent where the poor remains the large portion of

population

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as well as huge migration from the rural areas to the urban areas in search of sustained and high-paid jobs contributed to the hugely increasing and unbalance density of

population

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in a particular cities, ultimately led to overcrowding.

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, the development sometimes leads to an increase of living c

onditions including

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conditions, including

the living expenses as well as other increasing demand that would

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give pressure to many people while individual income are not comparable or suitable for the increased demands of lives in a modernized city.

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, other attributed factors which led to

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p

roblems

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problem

includes the lack of appropriate national policies set out by the respective governments. In order to solve

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problem,

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, governments should set up national guidelines or suitable policies for housing a

pplicable

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application

applications

to encourage the scattering of its people in balanced ways in each area or city which include the encouragement of its citizens to work in the city they were born, provision of low-interest loans with e

xtendable grace period.

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an extendable grace period

Governments may fund and have its own corporation to construct the building for the poor or low-income people. Why would the construction of b

uilding

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a building

buildings

be more efficient that building single houses? b

ecause,

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Because

while building could accommodate a huge number of r

esident,

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residents

it

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could save spatial or land

space

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to avoid infiltrating into the forest area and protect more environment. There will have far-reaching effects if construction took place more spaces by extending to more land. In conclusion, as the global

population

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has been increasing in various regions and continents and countries to achieve equitable balance of making the citizens satisfied with accommodation while sustainably preserving the environment, the governments should do with utmost efforts to achieve the mentioned goals or objectives, by issuing appropriate policies, have practical action plane, conduct throughout research, providing sufficient budget and attach great attentions, with the hard effort and careful plan and practical action, I believe the government will be able to satisfy its citizens about accommodation while

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effectively protecting the environments in their countries.