Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

#life #technology

Technology

has always been influencing

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is always influencing

has always influenced

our lives throughout human history, especially in recent decades.

However

, there are some people complaining

technology

makes

life

more complicated rather than simpler. Personally, I disagree with

this

view. I would argue technological developments in various areas have transformed our world enormously, making our lives much simpler. One of the biggest technological breakthroughs in

last few years

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the last few years

is the invention of the internet, which greatly improves people's working efficiency and productivity. It

also

enables people to enjoy

easier

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the easy

life

by providing online shopping stores so that they do not need to go traditional department stores, which tends to be tiring. People's communication

also

becomes much more convenient and efficient with the help of smart mobile phones and WI-FI

technology

. Thanks to them, we can keep in touch with our family members and friends anywhere and at any time. At home

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all kinds of high-tech appliances not only allow us to live a

life

of ease

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but

also

make our

life

quite enjoyable.

For example

, washing machines can help us do all the laundry, while high definition TVs are able to produce amazing special effects

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making TV programmes more entertaining. Still, sometimes

technology

does make things a little difficult

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particularly

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for

the elderly who are not willing to learn new things. One of the usually complained problems is that there are too many options

when it comes electronic

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when it comes to electronic

devices. IPhones

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IPads

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iPads

IP ads

ipads'

ipad's

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laptops etc.

have

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Have

so many similar functions that sometimes it is really hard for consumers to make

choice

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a choice

choices

the choice

Also

, most intelligent electronic devices are based on complicated operating systems, and

therefore

users have to spend quite some time on learning before feeling comfortable with them. Worse still, once they stop working

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usually because of defects within them, all the convenience given by them would disappear. In conclusion

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although

I accept things may occasionally become a little complicated due to

technology

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overall

technology

has enabled people to live much simpler

lives

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life

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

ome people think that visiting museums is the best way for children to learn history, while many others think there are several better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?