Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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These days, students should take a plenty of exams at

school

, beginning from the age of five or six till the moment they finish high

school

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both ups and downs, and give some conclusion. The main advantage is that children will grow up being very reliable by receiving lots of tasks.

In other words

, they will get used to

tale

the income or profit arising from such transactions as the sale of land or other property

take

more exams during their lifetime too,

consequently

they won't be struggling with problems. I have faced

this

kind of things, when I was in 9th grade,

refers to the speaker or writer

always complained about exams and coursework, but when I went to 10th class of high

school I

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school, I

was shocked, due to the fact that my teachers picked me as

school

president, they saw the responsibility from me, when I did my works.

Secondly

, nowadays all around the world governments pay more attention to education. In my point of view, exams and tests are necessary, to enter college or university. In the future, they will even get more harder tasks, so they should get themselves ready. A good example would be, university applications, students have a lot of exams during their senior years, but it's regards to their future job and provision.

On the other hand

, there are some disadvantages too. One of the biggest

disadvantage

Suggestion

disadvantages

is that, children will get overwhelmed at a very young age,

this

can affect to both physical and mental health. Recent studies, show that 75% of students all around the world, have bad eyesight, because of staring to screen

everytime

work done in addition to regular working hours

overtime

to do their

works

Suggestion

work

. Another major drawback is that students

can not

cannot

focus on

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

significant things,

such

as sport and extracurricular activities or even spend free time together with family.

In other words

, too much work may bring to social inactivity. From what has been discussed

above there

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above, there

should be drawn conclusion that,

school

work have benefits and drawbacks, but if there will be an extra time, they can balance both

school

and other activities.

Tue Apr 14 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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