Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

These days, students should take a plenty of exams at
school
, beginning from the age of five or six till the moment they finish high
school
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both ups and downs, and give some conclusion. The main advantage is that children will grow up being very reliable by receiving lots of tasks.
In other words
, they will get used to
tale
the income or profit arising from such transactions as the sale of land or other property
take
more exams during their lifetime too,
consequently
they won't be struggling with problems. I have faced
this
kind of things, when I was in 9th grade,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
always complained about exams and coursework, but when I went to 10th class of high
school I
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school, I
was shocked, due to the fact that my teachers picked me as
school
president, they saw the responsibility from me, when I did my works.
Secondly
, nowadays all around the world governments pay more attention to education. In my point of view, exams and tests are necessary, to enter college or university. In the future, they will even get more harder tasks, so they should get themselves ready. A good example would be, university applications, students have a lot of exams during their senior years, but it's regards to their future job and provision.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages too. One of the biggest
disadvantage
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disadvantages
is that, children will get overwhelmed at a very young age,
this
can affect to both physical and mental health. Recent studies, show that 75% of students all around the world, have bad eyesight, because of staring to screen
everytime
work done in addition to regular working hours
overtime
to do their
works
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work
. Another major drawback is that students
can not
can not
cannot
focus on
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
significant things,
such
as sport and extracurricular activities or even spend free time together with family.
In other words
, too much work may bring to social inactivity. From what has been discussed
above there
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above, there
should be drawn conclusion that,
school
work have benefits and drawbacks, but if there will be an extra time, they can balance both
school
and other activities.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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