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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travelers?

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Life starts out of your comfort zone. Travelling is one of those activities which pull you out of your comfort zone and offer
great opportunity
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a great opportunity
 to learn and explore. These
days
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day
culture
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cultures
 of domestic and international excursion is getting popular as compared to
past
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the past
. In
this
 essay I will discuss reasons of
this
 change and associated benefits.
Firstly
, if we compare today with
past
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the past
, travelling has become easy. Now, we have more mode of commute and variety of options available.
For
example if
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example, if
 you want to
travel
 from Pakistan to India. You can go via plane, ship, train, bus or even
on
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in
 your own car, after acquiring all necessary permits. In each option you have
choice
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a choice
the choice
 of
travel
 alone or if you need
company
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a company
 you can
also
 go join different travelling groups.
Also
, you can manage your trip cost with
variety
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a variety
 of modifications. Like you can go
for
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to
 ride share as well as accommodation sharing to make your trip more economical.
Secondly
, reason of increase in travelling is awareness. Thanks to
internet
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the internet
 and globalization, now people are growing more aware about opportunities of studies, businesses or even holidays out of their territory. With multiple options available, as discussed in
above paragraph
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the above paragraph
, they can manage to avail them. These
days’
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days
 lots of students travelling to other countries to acquire degrees in
subject
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a subject
subjects
the subject
 which do not offered by their local universities and colleges.
Also
, business men and women travelling different regions to make
business deal
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a business deal
 where they get
best quotes
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the best quotes
 and quality.
In addition
, it is
also
 seen that now people are more interested in spending their holiday out of their cities and countries as there are range of comprehensive
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 packages offering great deal of economy and adventure. Now coming toward benefits. I believe travelling broadens exposure. You explore new places and experience different
culture
 and customs. You can make
most
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the most
 of it in your community by adopting their best practices.
For
example if
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example, if
 you visit Japan and experience their work
culture
 and replicate it in your workplace. You can make your working more efficient. Same is the case with businesses. If you
travel
 other country and witness better way of production you can imitate them in your country and make your operations equally efficient.
In
addition you
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addition, you
 can make
difference
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a difference
the difference
 in other communities by sharing and utilizing your knowledge and experience.
For
instance these
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instance, these
days’
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days
 lots of professionals
travel
 to less privileged areas to provide education, health services and so on In the end,
besides
 relaxing travelling is a great way of leveraging learning and business opportunities out of your territories. Exploring new places and
culture
 helps in broadening your
exposure which
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exposure, which
give
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gives
 more ideas for personal, professional and community improvements. By travelling you get a chance to share your
culture
 and customs with other societies and you can make
difference
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a difference
 there as well by sharing your knowledge and exposure. I believe
this
 surge in travelling trend is quite healthy and should be promoted.

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