Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Beauty of
Opera
Most people think that
ether
after a negative statement used as an intensive meaning something like 'likewise' or 'also'
either
you will be interested in
Opera
from the beginning or you will be bored with it.
Opera
originally belong
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originally belongs
to Italian traditional music or theatre performance which is the main role is played by a singer. At the end of the 16th century,
Opera
“Dafne “was performed in Florence. Later,
Opera
became more popular throughout the Europe. When the time came to
18th century
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the 18th century
, Great composer Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart began his
Opera
seria
. He composed a lot of
popular
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the popular Opera
Opera
including “The Marriage of Figaro (Le nozze
di
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DI
Figaro)”, “Don Giovanni”, “Cosi fan tutte “, “Abduction from the Seraglio and Magic Flute”. But Among his works, “The Marriage of Figaro (Le nozze
di
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DI
Figaro)” are still appreciated There was
gala concert
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a gala concert
the gala concert
in Istiqlol Palace, I was
volunteer
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volunteering
volunteered
. At
Pinnacle moment
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the Pinnacle moment
of the concert, the turn was given
Opera
singers. Until
this
moment I wasn't paying any attention to the
concert but
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concert, but
when the conductor referred to
orchestra
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the orchestra
. A smooth sound had begun to emerge and
Opera
singer Jinsbek Piyazov start singing. At
this
moment I fell in love with
this
music. The
opera
song was “Raho Tango”. Later I began to add
opera
songs to my playlist. Usually, when I am fed up with everything, I find myself listening to
Opera
songs because when I listen to them, I feel calm and excited. You may not understand
Opera
deeply when you listen for the
first
time, but later, you will love it.
Opera
is still popular throughout Europe.
Opera
concerts are always full in
Opera
houses like The Royal
Opera
House in England, Sydney
Opera
House in Australia, La Scale
Opera
House in Italy and “
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
.” But recent statistics shows that
Majority number
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the Majority number
a Majority number
of
Opera
enthusiasts are over 60-year-old people. For that
reasons
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reason
, most
opera
houses offer
discount
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discounts
to 21 – 40-year-old people in order to attract more
opera
enthusiasts.

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