Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

railway

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The railway

Railway

has become an indispensable part and parcel of our life.

without

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Without

this

transportation

, one cannot imagine our life.

some

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Some

people think that the

government

/country should spend their

money

to build a new

railway

.

however

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However

, another group of thinkers believes that the

government

should spend

money

on improving existing

transportation

.

before

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Before

, forming my opinion I intend to elucidate that both the viewpoint duly in

this

follow

essay

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the essay

.

First

, we talk about the

first

view. In

this

contemporary epoch,

railway

transportation

has become a prestigious medium for

transportation

.

people

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People

use

this

service to travel for their day to day work.

some

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Some

countries try to build new

railway

lines in their area

for

example metro

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example, metro

railways, electric air railways, underground railways, etc. I reinforce

this

statement that due to some reason.

in

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In

this

frenetic world

this

type

of

transportation

role of the part in individual people.

this

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This

type

of

transportation

saves lots of time of people. Due to the

technology

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technology, railway

railway

system

have become more convenient and very fast so they give tremendous experience to the people. But

on the other hand

, it will be very costly for poor people.

every

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Every

people

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person

cannot

enjoying

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enjoy

this

type

of facility. Now, we talk about the

second

viewpoint. Some people bolster the statement that countries should spend

money

on the current

railway

system

.

lots

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Lots

of countries are using the old rail

system

which was based on the energy of charcoal.

this

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This

technology has affected our environment as well as human health

also

it has very noisy.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

the

government

should implement eco-friendly exhaust in that

type

of

transportation

system

so it declined the rate of pollution.

a

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A

country should implement an online booking facility

everywhere so

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everywhere, so

, people book the ticket easily and they save time too. To conclude, I fully endorse the

first

viewpoint because nowadays

people do

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people, do

not worry about

money

and they spend

money

on their convenience and comfort.

but

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But

I think the

government

should try to reduce the ticket rate so everyone could use modern

transportation

and their fabulous facilities.