Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

The revolutionary advancement in modern technology has endowed people with substantial resources for their survival in the best possible way. The availability of
variety
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a variety
of facilities has enabled people to choose beneficial opportunities for their lives.
However
, there are sections of society where people cannot afford even basic necessities. For them these choices are out of reach, so I
am partially agree
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partially agree
have partially agreed
with
this
view. In the present era, human beings have exponentially increased the number of options to avail in the various fields like
food
, education, transport and many more.
Firstly
, the creative methods to produce
variety
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a variety
of
food
and their preservation have benefited
human population
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human populations
the human population
in many ways, they can enjoy
diversity
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the diversity
a diversity
of
food
and significant type of edibles during
entire year
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the entire year
an entire year
.
For instance
, seasonal fruits and vegetables are available almost whole year, all because of modernised preserving techniques.
Secondly
, advancement and development in education sector provide students to select from
enormous number
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an enormous number
the enormous number
of professional fields and make a successful career.
Furthermore
, while travelling we can opt for many choices according to our affordability and convenience, due to
inventions
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the inventions
of faster means of transport leading to revolution in transport hubs.
However
, there are unequal distribution of resources and technology, people do not have options to choose
.
Accept space
.
Many underdeveloped and developing countries are lacking the basic necessities to survive like
food
, health, financial resources. According to data provided by WHO, 45% of
population
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the population
do have access to clean water and 35% people are spending substandard life.
Moreover
, certain jobs and study courses are limited to certain countries only, leaving others devoid of these resources. In conclusion, undoubtedly, people have access to many choices to enjoy in their
lives but
Accept comma addition
lives, but
there is uneven distribution of resources. Everyone has
equal approach
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an equal approach
to all types of technological advancement,
formost
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for most
there should be provision of
atleast
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at least
fundamental human rights.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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