Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

The revolutionary advancement in modern technology has endowed people with substantial resources for their survival in the best possible way. The availability of

variety

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a variety

of facilities has enabled people to choose beneficial opportunities for their lives.

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, there are sections of society where people cannot afford even basic necessities. For them these choices are out of reach, so I

am partially agree

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partially agree

have partially agreed

with

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view. In the present era, human beings have exponentially increased the number of options to avail in the various fields like

food

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, education, transport and many more.

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, the creative methods to produce

variety

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a variety

of

food

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and their preservation have benefited

human population

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human populations

the human population

in many ways, they can enjoy

diversity

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the diversity

a diversity

of

food

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and significant type of edibles during

entire year

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the entire year

an entire year

.

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, seasonal fruits and vegetables are available almost whole year, all because of modernised preserving techniques.

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, advancement and development in education sector provide students to select from

enormous number

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an enormous number

the enormous number

of professional fields and make a successful career.

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, while travelling we can opt for many choices according to our affordability and convenience, due to

inventions

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the inventions

of faster means of transport leading to revolution in transport hubs.

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, there are unequal distribution of resources and technology, people do not have options to choose

.

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.

Many underdeveloped and developing countries are lacking the basic necessities to survive like

food

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, health, financial resources. According to data provided by WHO, 45% of

population

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the population

do have access to clean water and 35% people are spending substandard life.

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, certain jobs and study courses are limited to certain countries only, leaving others devoid of these resources. In conclusion, undoubtedly, people have access to many choices to enjoy in their

lives but

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lives, but

there is uneven distribution of resources. Everyone has

equal approach

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an equal approach

to all types of technological advancement,

formost

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for most

there should be provision of

atleast

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at least

fundamental human rights.