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You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community.An organisation in your area works for the benefit of old people.Write a letter to the in-charge of that organisation explaining Why do you want to help How can you help them

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter to express my willingness to work as a volunteer in your organisation which is working for the welfare of older people. Sir, I am working as an assistant professor of Sociology in a college
of
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 our hometown, which involves teaching students
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how to serve
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society.In order to teach the students about
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humanity, I personally want to set a good example in front of them so that they can take inspiration from me and
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, indulge themselves in
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social work. Let me explain in detail.As we all know, today we are living in a greying community where the elderly population is growing at an exorbitant rate.These elderly people are living in an isolation so I would like to spend some time with them in order to add immense pleasure
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 their life. I would be highly grateful if I will get an opportunity to work for you.I will be available anytime during the weekends.
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, I remain busy from Monday to Friday from 9am to 5pm,
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 on these
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 I would prefer to have evening hours. Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours'
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 faithfully,
Jashanpreet
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Jaspreet
 Kaur

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