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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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Some people believe that it is good for the
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 to have the same teacher for a few years,
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, others think
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 having new teachers every year. I will explore arguments for and against and I will give reasons using examples to define my answers. Generally, people believe that students who have the same educator for several years have more benefits.
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 because usually, people don't like to change anything. Of course, the students which the schoolteacher is no changing know him very well and know which method of teaching he using. They have the near relationship and better communication, as well. That makes them lazier.
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; the
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 knows when the new topic coming, the teacher always gives them a new material to learn, so he usually don't look for other ways to get
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 material.
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, every change has an impact on improving and progress.
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 way is more difficult,
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, gives better results.
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; the new educator brings the new method of teaching, give the change for students to better develop. The students have to give more power and hard work to know the new method of teaching.
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, these solutions require more engaged and work from students. In my opinion is better for students to have the new teacher each year, because it gives more chance to bigger developing and progressing. I think
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 a better way and a chance for every
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 to develop creativity and communication and on the end betters education.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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