More and more people are moving away from an agricultureral background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.what will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer.

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Over
imigration
the movement of persons from one country or locality to another
migration
of country side habitants to the cities in the hope of better job
apportunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
has sparked much problem.
This
Suggestion
Thus
, if not policed, may inflict adverse effects like over population in cities and loss of agriculture sector. An array of measures should be taken in order to counteract
this
trend
such
as provide people of these
location
Suggestion
locations
with proper job
Suggestion
with a proper job
aportunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
and
oferring
something offered (as a proposal or bid)
offering
offerings
the governmental aid to them.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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