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Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

#phones #lives
Mobile phones
has been hailed
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have been hailed
 as one of the most fascinating scientific
invention
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inventions
 in the history of mankind.Some people uphold
this
 invention as a positive trend while
other
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others
 have reservations about it.
However
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I will discuss both the aspects of mobile phones in
this
 essay. To embark on, with regards to positive development
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one of the prominent
benefit
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benefits
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,
cell hones are upgrading by leaps and bounds and providing us new avenues while keeping update our self with
latest news
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the latest news
 and current affairs.
Moreover
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By using
this
 device
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people can easily interact with their
closer
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closest
 ones around the world
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.
Hence
, mobile phones
is
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are
 one the cheapest and convenient communication device
Furthermore
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People can
also
mange
be successful; achieve a goal
manage
 their work and study through mobiles with the help of internet.To exemplify
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During the
lock down
the act of confining prisoners to their cells (usually to regain control during a riot)
lockdown
 period
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I used my mobile phone to attend my live class at home.
Thus
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it is an invention which offers
tremendous amount
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a tremendous amount
 of knowledge and help us to enhance our skills.
In addition
, it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
 us to entertain our
self
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selves
 and offer numerous amenities like watching movies, listen to music and
also
 connect with
whole world
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a whole world
by
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of
 social media. Having said that, there is
also
 an another side that mobile phones have some drawbacks which are highly appreciable.
First
 and foremost
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the excessive use of mobile phones and electronic gadgets create physical and mental health issues as youngsters are spending most of the time with these devices and facing several problems like lack of visibility
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migraine and many more.
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Of
 the
to
being one more than one
two
 of it
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mobile phones emit radiation waves which eventually leads a detrimental impact on our health and raise the chances of having brain cancer and heart diseases. To conclude, after gauging both the advantages and disadvantages
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I opine that people need to use mobile
phones according
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phones, according
 their needs and
also
 try to prevent their children.
However
, mobile phones are invented to support and facilitate human
endeavor
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
.
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