Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely accepted that, the ideas and views of the general public would have been governed by the people, who rule over the mass media and only limited ways available for people to correct
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. I think
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statement holds a valid ground because media affect the thinking of people in many ways. People know about the situation in the country from the reports by journalist who worked in various media organizations.
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, these people are paid workers so their reporting inevitably biased towards the personal agendas of the owners.
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the heads of public media cooperations
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appointed by the government, most of the times they are loyalist of the ruling party.
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, people who working in these places do not tend to publish any news adverse to the governing authority, even though, it is true or it can affect the society in
negative way
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a negative way
negative ways
.
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result peoples
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result, people
result people
minds secretly control by ways of misinformations.
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, state media always keep a censorship on corruption and mismanagement of the present government.
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, from
peoples side
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the peoples side
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trend happened to be
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an
inexorable phenomenon, public cannot resist against
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because
lack
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the lack
of amenities available to them. In
present juridical system
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a present juridical system
acts about freedom of press create loopholes upon acting on legal procedure for any kind of
misbehavior
improper or wicked or immoral behavior
misbehaviour
in
media
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the media
.
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, only few independent platforms available for public to authenticate the facts in media briefs.
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, governments hesitate to pass the laws against spreading fake news because of in some occasions it must be drawback to them,
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, it is people who
pays
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pay
taxes to keep
government
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the government
going.
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, in considering private media they have to earn money by themselves so they do not reluctant to adopt any means of
unethical way
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the unethical way
to influence peoples minds
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as commercials on foods not suitable for health. To conclude, in most societies, people don't have any alternative source to get information so they undeniably rely on mass media by not considering its accuracy. Media owners
always works
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always work
are always working
have always worked
on their own plans, to achieve their targets they always try to control the attitudes and opinions of the people from media
own
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ownership
by them.
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