Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#government #money #railways #roads

There are many ways for people to transport from place to place and these vehicles are becoming more

diversifield

having variety of character or form or components; or having increased variety

diversified

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the most common ways for people to travel are railways and roads

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Therefore some

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Therefore, some

said that

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

should

invested

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invest

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railways rather than roads

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In my opinion

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refers to the speaker or writer

am not fully agree

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do not fully agree

have not fully agreed

with

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statement

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From ancient until now roads have

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played

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a vital role

and essential to human domestic and travel

life but

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life, but

since science and technology get more and more develop, roads no longer dominates as before

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railways are becoming viral in many

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nations

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mostly the developed countries

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Railways are faster than roads and more

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class

in society from low to high class

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for developing and undeveloped countries

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the funds that the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

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for

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not only it is too costly for these

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nations, but

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countries, there

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look in the reality there is unnecessary for the

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invest more

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the railways

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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