Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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With the advancement in health and medical sectors, overcome of many great diseases can be possible. The use of creatures for the experiment has become normal. Some people believe that a scientist should not do tests on animals while opponents of it not believe so.

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essay I will intend to delve some reasons to my view. The

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and foremost reason for not do experiments on animal is that some species are on verge of extinction. By experimenting on them, it would create some serious problem. The whole ecosystem would be damaged.

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, in 1990, Indonesia had done so many tests on creatures and result was extinction of some species. Same for snakes. The snake is like a basement for the ecosystem. If the amount is not capable

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serious problem could be experienced.

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why the government of India restricted experiments on the snakes.

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, the animals have

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life same as human beings. We do not interfere in their's life. On the other side, some advocated opine that to research on animals, they argued that the human being having a more precious life than creatures. The main reason to do so is that some species have the almost same body system working as a human. If the research is done directly on human

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it could create a harmful effect on them, many researches are done to only show how much the effective medicines working on them. To sum up, we should consider our self in place of animals before doing experiments so I'd there if there is not necessary to do so,

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it should neglect.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays

Some people think computer games have negative impacts on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take