In some countries, online shopping is gradually replacing in-store shopping. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative impacts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, the question of whether online shopping should replace brick and mortar stores or not has been receiving a great deal of public

attetion

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attention

Although

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online shopping has some problems, the merits will negate the drawbacks. There are a number of disadvantages for citizens

to believe

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believe

that online

shoppinng

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

shipping

should not replace in-store shopping.

First

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, since people

can not

cannot

touch and

eperience

the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities

experience

appearance

their

good

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best

physically, they can be able to have some risks

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shopping. In fact, some shop will send inferior products to buyers to earn a fortune in

deceptive way

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a deceptive way

deceptive ways

, which results in frustration's users.

Second

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, by placing

Use synonyms

order

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orders

and completing

online transaction

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online transactions

an online transaction

, the majority of people will be able to being victimized of hi-tech crime, like ID thief.

This

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means that all

profile

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profiles

of users will be sent to

seller

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the seller

and

hacker

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the hacker

hackers

can steal

this

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information, which leads to users' information will be invaded and used for evil purposes. There

are

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however

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, the upside of online shopping can easily overshadow its downside.

First

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, in

order

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to save a great deal time, people can consider online shopping as the best choice.

For example

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Accept space

with the pace of hectic life nowadays, the majority of people can use online shopping to

order

Use synonyms

food in case they have a number of other work needed to finish, which helps them get more done.

Second

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Accept space

if people are in situations that they

can not

cannot

go out, they can use online shopping to place

order

Use synonyms

food and other necessities of life.

For instance

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, due to the adverse impact of epidemic Covid 19, people need to stay at home to protect them and society so online shopping becomes

potential way

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a potential way

shopping

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shop

, which play an integral part of online shopping in the world

thesedays

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these days

. In conclusion, we

can not

cannot

deny that both sides are well-grounded. In my opinion, I side with online shopping is

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

and it it

also

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advisable that we should consider both

way

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ways

of shopping in each

sitation

the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time

situation

station

situations

to choose the best choice.

Wed Apr 15 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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331 words

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In some countries, online shopping is gradually replacing in-store shopping. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative impacts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Nowadays, many people find it difficult to balance their work and personal lives. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees achieve a better work-life balance?

Maths plays a vital role in a business' success. Agree/disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

you have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that we booked by the organiser of a company. write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include, details about the meeting, the problem you face and what should be done.