Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

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People argue that it is

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important to pay attention on the present rather than spending unnecessary time planning for the

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. Personally, I opposed

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statement since planning is an essential part of everyday life. Planning contributes to success. An organized and outlines

plan

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serves as a guide to come up with better result,

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a person with a good preparation has an edge to excel among others. A successful business,

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, prior to operate, the owner carefully developed a business

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specifically designed on how to promote and maintained a high-quality product that will satisfy the need of its costumer.

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, it will gain more profit while preventing

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loss or bankruptcy.

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, having a structured

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is considered as a valuable tool in the accomplishment of one’s goal.

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future

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is unpredictable, and a problem may arise anytime causing stress and wildly unthinking

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for many.

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, people who have a well-established

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for

uncontrol

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circumstances, such

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as health or economic crisis is far better prepare compare to those people who simply seize the moment without thinking for tomorrow.

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, a family with a good financial

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is less worry

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how to sustain their basic needs.

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, those individuals who spend money like a one-day millionaire and fails to save for

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used, are facing

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a dilemma

the dilemma

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on how to survive and meet their necessities. To avoid

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planning is the best way that everyone should practice. In conclusion,

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living

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the present and enjoying life to its fullest is vital, I believe that having a proper

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plan

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is the most effective method to achieve objective and setting the right tract to success and handle unforeseen situation.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

291 words

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Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

14.With computers and the Internet, people can study and work without going to school or a company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by providing at least six years of free education for each child, so that all children can read, write and use numbers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

people should only buy food sourced locally.what are advantages and disadvantages?