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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

#month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #events #organiser #interest #role #information
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to request you to participate in the social event, as you know that I am heading for a month for a training programme in the UK and you are looking for an organiser for the seminar. I would like to express my interest in
this
 particular position to organise social papers work and arrange meetings at the same place. I would like to share my qualities that would be helpful to select the right candidate.
In addition
, I am curious to know more information on the social events which help to boost my level to determine how I can prepare for the social function
hence
, I would like you to provide excess information to me so I could be quite ready to do presentation and all. All in all, I would like to expand my ability and hands-on experience which is really based on a volunteer at the community centre.
This
 work experience can guide me to deal with
this
 type of event where a number of people gather in a particular place. I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Hardik Patel
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The logical flow of ideas is crucial for understanding.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and create a logical flow that makes the text easy to follow.
Coherence & Cohesion
Start your letter with an appropriate greeting and end with a suitable closing statement.
Task Achievement
Fully address all three bullet points mentioned in the task with relevant information and details.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter, reflecting formality where necessary.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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