There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the transport company. In your letter: • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting the public • Suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction related to the bus service last
days
. I am a regular user of Correct quantifier usage
few days
public
transport Add an article
the public
a public
system
. The Fix the agreement mistake
systems
buses
do not follow the schedule and it is delaying me. Earlier the buses
ran every 7 minutes, but now I have to wait about 15 minutes for it. Because of this
, commuters like me cannot reach their office on time. Furthermore
, sometimes the buses
are cancelled suddenly due to top it off, the bus is not in a good condition given the torn seats, broken handles and problem with a motor and people have to look for other options to reach their destinations. Consequently
, people have to travel in congested buses
or take other alternate bus
that takes longer or somebody takes a taxi. I suggest Change the wording
another alternate bus
other alternate buses
to increase
the number of Change the verb form
increasing
buses
to accommodate all passengers and follow the timetable strictly.
Hoping for a positive response.
Yours sincerely,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.