The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.

The graph below gives information about cinema attendance in Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.
The chart shows the
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amount
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of
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the Australian
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population going to the cinema in a
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20-year-old
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year
old period starting in 1990. The information is provided by
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group,
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the
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attendance from the
ypungest
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youngest
the most noticeable never descending from 85%. The data from the 24-24
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, suffers a modest variation in time starting
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89% and growing to
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95% in 2010. From 1998 to 2006 it remains steady
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a 90%.
In contrast
, the 35-49 and the
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year
olds experience an abrupter variation of more than
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20% along the studied period. It is expected that the amount of people watching movies from three of the age groups rises from 2006 to 2010 reaching
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highest
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this
year
. 98%, 85% and 62% respectively.
On the contrary
, the 25-
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olds attendance will decrease considerably to
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75% during these years. Its most noticeable attendance rate is at the start of the 21st Century with more than
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80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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