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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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New technologies have taken over the world since the advent of the
coronavirus
, distance learning
has become
Suggestion
is becoming
becomes
 a daily routine for all students around the world. Through
this
 type of training, students have access to more information and they
learning
Suggestion
are learning
learn
 more, but organization is perhaps the biggest problem with
this
 system. In fact a lot more information can be found on the Internet than in a textbook.
This
 is one of the benefits of much faster and easier access to knowledge.
Similarly
 is the opportunity that you can set your own priorities and tasks for the day. There are no timetables and program here, and you decide at what time of the day what you will study. Even so, self-organization may be an advantage for students, but it cannot be said for teachers. The main problem is coordination of teachers. They all work on many different platforms, each of them working radically differently and giving multiple tasks in one day with a very short deadline for completion. And all
this
 confuses the student and makes the task much more complicated. Overall, the 21st century has come and
this
 is the future. Not the whiteboard and the teacher in front of her took the lesson learn by heart, but virtual classrooms with many different interesting types of tasks that stimulate student creativity.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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