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The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working agreement has more advantages or disadvantages question mark

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Nowadays, societies can do
work
 at
home
, because in modern
life
 appear Internet.
This
 essay will contain
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 and disadvantages of
earn
Suggestion
earning
money
 at
home
 helping with Internet. In modern
life
 people can do everything with social media, that may cause for some problems.
Firstly
, population
,
Accept space
,
 who have
work
Suggestion
worked
 in Internet
,
Accept space
,
do not do
Suggestion
does not do
 anything for other people
, that meaning they
Suggestion
, meaning that they
 become more egoistic and aggressive.
Secondly
,
Accept space
,
this
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
,
Accept space
,
 which consist of sitting at
home
 and make own
work
 on
computer
Suggestion
the computer
a computer
,
have
Suggestion
has
 really problem with their health and spiritual development.
However
, make a
money
Suggestion
monetary
 help with
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
, have useful things like
spend
Suggestion
spending
time
 for yourself. Makeover, it
is meaning
Suggestion
means
 that societies can do thing that some people never cannot do. One of the advantages is that youngsters
,
Accept space
,
 who get only fifteen-sixteen years old can earn
money
 from internet
,
Accept space
,
 that help
for
Suggestion
from
of
 their parents. In
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 side
,
Accept space
,
 in the
world people
Accept comma addition
world, people
 waste their
time
 to internet too much and have
work
Suggestion
worked
 on
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
 will destroy them inner and physical. In fact, people need
go
Suggestion
to go
 to the outside more than twice
,
Accept space
,
 but if you do not have
reason
Suggestion
a reason
 to go outside
,
Accept space
,
 so
socities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
 will not breath with clear air. In one of the advantages for parents have
money
 from
Internet
Suggestion
the Internet
, that they can spend
time
 with their children, because kids of the modern
life
 want to more attention. In conclusion, if societies have
work
 at
home
, they will be lazy and spend their
time
to
Suggestion
on
 unnecessary things.

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