The tables give information about sales of Fairtrade – labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about sales of Fairtrade – labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables depict a volume of exports of
Fairtrade – labelled
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coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004
in particular
European 5 countries. Units are measured in
million
euros
.
Overall
,
while
sales
of
banana
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bananas
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slightly decreased in
Sweden
,
Denmark
and other
countries'
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countries
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sales
noticeable
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rose in both products over the span. In terms of Coffee,
Switzerland
was
leader
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a leader
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in selling coffee with 3
million
of
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euros
in 1999. That's followed by
Denmark
, 1.8
million
; the
UK
, 1.5
million
; Belgium; 1
millions
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;
Sweden
, 0.8
million
, respectively.
However
, by 2004 the situation had changed;
therefore
, the
UK
import amounts had soared about 14 times, reaching
to
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20
million
of
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euros
. Meanwhile, the incomes of
Switzerland
have surged 2-fold.
On the contrary
, the export rate of bananas has changed differently in given countries over the period. In 1999,
Switzerland
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Switzerland's
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income was 15
million
of
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euros
;
however
,
this
more than doubled, reaching 47
million
.
Whereas
,
sales
of
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the
UK
increased more than 5 times from 1
millions
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million
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to 5.5
million
.
By contrast
, the
sales
of
Sweden
and
Denmark
almost had halved by 2004, 1.8
million
– 1
millions
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million
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and 2
millions
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million
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– 0.9
million
, respectively. In summary, the
UK
and
Switzerland
were leaders in
export
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the export
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market
in
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both products
while
Sweden
and
Denmark
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Denmark's
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sales
declined
in
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bananas.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million, euros, sales, sweden, denmark, switzerland, uk, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
  • socio-economic impact
  • market penetration
  • exponential growth
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