Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare?

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Most of
government
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has a mission to supply
health
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care
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for its citizens.
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, these providing free
health
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care
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bring both advantages and disadvantages to the
government
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. There are several
benefit
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benefits
of free medical system.
To begin
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with, it can insure to provide medical services and treatments for all people because fee services are very expensive with poor citizens, even with the rich people
also
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can’t afford it.
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, free of charge medical services will make people who
do not have
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have not had
are not having
to pay come to test always more so doctor can detect early diseases and treat timely and increase
ratio
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the ratio
of sick.
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, free
health
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care
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system can more shield than for all people because epidemic diseases may spread widely.
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, if people often come to the hospital,
doctor
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the doctor
doctors
a doctor
can be early
diagnose
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diagnosis
and research effective
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solution issue.
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, when
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government
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the government
give
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gives
people profits, citizens have
persuasion
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persuaded
into
government
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.
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, there are many drawbacks of free medical system. It is
decrease quality
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a decrease quality
of medical services because the lack of money
invest
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invests
machine and import new device. Addition, unless
quality
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the quality
of
machine
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the machine
is repair details, it will lead to time find diseases lower.
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, when
government
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provide
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provides
non-profit, they will be face to huge salary to pay for
nurse
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the nurse
nurses
and the doctor, even
staff
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the staff
can leave the work so that hospital might miss human resource.
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Besides
, provide for free
health
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care
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services can be lack of budget to develop other field
such
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as education, culture, environment. In conclusion, free of charge medical have a lot of benefit an
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the government
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will have consist policy more

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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