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Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education?

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Most countries practice the education without a
choice
 subjects;
however
, minority of countries purpose to choose that young people want to learn. Overall, both
this
 system has a positive influence in a part directly develops your strongest side and drawback in a part balance number of pupils in class that
this
 essay will reveal.
Firstly
, few people can decline the fact that all students are different it means they have various interests and strongest sides, thereby a
choice
 of subjects helps uncover their potential and better prepare for the future.
For example
, a school has the humanitarian subjects that not for everyone
such
 as the biology or history because for some types of students difficult remember many dates and term;
however
, the hard science complicated for some people too.
Thus
, when students choose subjects that well-fit for them it can help them evade complicated discipline and better concentrate on their passion that will help better prepare to work. Notwithstanding, education without
choice
 allow pupils developing fully and keeping in balance numbers of student in classes.
For instance
, the literature and geography help to develop speaking skills and increase knowledge about the Earth and other countries that time-to-time help.
Nonetheless
, young people who aiming on the hard science could skip it that lead to controversial aftermath.
Besides
, all classes have different numbers of student there in one be able to be the overabundance, but another will have a shortage.
Consequently
, it will lead to implement quote that decrease
choice
 and partly return to a system with the same classes. To conclude, each school, especially a private one, could choose a system that better suit to it;
nevertheless
, some subjects must be the same for all students for fully developing.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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