The charts below show information about three different deserts around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main information and making comparisons.

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The tables below, are four major properties of triple famous deserts around the globe. The deserts assessed in the tables are

Sahara

Taklimakan

Great

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and Great

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Basin

those

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which

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are located in Africa, Asia, and North America respectively.

Also

, the comparison criteria are size, average annual rainfall, average temperatures, and temperature extremes, which

described

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are described

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as the highest temperature reached annually.

According to

the size, the

Sahara

desert

, which is known as the world's greatest

desert

, has a myriad area of 9000000 square kilometres and is significantly vast

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with the rest of them. By the average annual rainfall, the

Sahara

desert

tends to acquire more moisture than

Taklimakan

and Great

Basin

Although

sparse rainfalls in Great

Basin

don't follow any specific procedure, the rainfall values systematically vary in north-south and west-east directions in the

Sahara

and

Taklimakan

respectively.

Furthermore

, the average temperatures in the

Sahara

desert

are slightly higher than the rest.

On the other hand

, the temperature

ra6nge

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range

Taklimakan

spikes

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from -9 up to 25, which is even more significant than others.

However

, the extremes within

Sahara

and Great

basin

are almost the same, the

Taklimakan

experiences the lowest record of about -26.

Wed Apr 15 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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1 paragraphs

193 words

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