Some people believe tha people today have no interest in maintaining country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people thag we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Suggestion
It's
widely believed that modern-day individuals are far more
indiffernt
marked by a lack of interest
indifferent
to maintain local culture and traditions.
Although
globalisation poses treat to traditional cultures in some ways. I strongly believe that there are still people concerned about the conservation of their custom. On the one
handglobalisation
, admittedly, prompted the pre, globalisation called modern culture. Thanks to mass-media
informations
a message received and understood
information
ia
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
quickly
diaeminated
cause to become widely known
disseminated
dominated
across the world leading certain rends
previal
be larger in number, quantity, power, status or importance
prevail

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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