Some people say that schools should spend more money on computers, others say that more money should be spent on teachers' wages

The finance for public education is a subject that matters for parents, teachers and students. Since schools have a finite budget to share through different programs and student’s necessities, if wrongly used affects the entire system. Because of that has a discussion where the

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is better expended, while one will agree that technology to

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a room in a school where lessons take place

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is important and should receive more investment, others say that teachers are the most essential asset for children’s education and should be

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a priority

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monetary

resources. I personally agree with the

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one hand the use of computer in the

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a room in a school where lessons take place

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an important tool

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to students’ learning because children nowadays are

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more exposed

to technology and

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not could be used to assist to complete the activities as an approach to diversify the way of learning. For that reason, some people believe the

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should be

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allocated

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school

purchase better and more advanced computers and tablets or create laboratories

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the opinion that I share, without

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teachers, none of

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is possible, and raise the wage of them should be the

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priority for schools and governments when planning where to allocate the

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. Teachers play the main role for children education, they are the responsible for idealizing and putting in practice the pedagogical methods and supervisor student’s achievements. Provided that, as any other

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teacher

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productivity is correlated to how appreciated their work is. The increase of

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the wage

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is the major form to show that. In conclusion, despites that technology in schools is highly beneficial for students learning, I believe that

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salary has a direct impact

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students’

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, to improve the educational system teachers should be the

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