A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many individuals think that animals are deceived by humans because they are not given equal right as a human. Others think that animal can be used to satisfy various needs of humans. According to me, Human does not have rights to exploit animals and use them as

slaves

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slaves, however

however

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animals can be used in ethical ways

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this

essay

refers to the speaker or writer

will discuss both

view points

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoints

and give my opinion on it

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There are several reasons why people feel that animals are exploited and should

given

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give

same rights

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the same rights

as humans.

First

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animals are used in labs for research for testing medicines.Labs person will

purposly

with intention; in an intentional manner

purposely

infict

impose something unpleasant

inflict

pain on animals to do

medicine

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medical

testing or just to know the reaction of animals

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For example

, rats

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monkey owl dogs main

labs

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lab

animals to be used in labs in various countries.

Secondly

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animals are kept in wire cages just to

served

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serve

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our plates. Most

animal

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animals

in the cages are

deaseased

caused by or altered by or manifesting disease or pathology

diseased

or dead and most

them

people in general

they

never seen

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have never seen

never saw

sun light

the rays of the sun

sunlight

lastly animals

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Lastly, animals

Lastly animals

used for travelling and

entertainmant

an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

entertainment

purpose which is another selfish way of using animal and abuse them.

animal

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The animal

Animal

An animal

can be used in more ethical as it is not possible for humans to live without depending on animals

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goverment

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Government

Goverment

can impose

rule

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rules

so that animals will suffer less.The nonessential use of animals can be

stop

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stop, such

stopped such

stopped stopped such

such

as in labs

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circus or zoo. In slaughter houses, people can provide

atleat

a person trained to compete in sports

athletes

living environment

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for

animals

to so

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too, so

too so

that they can have

good life

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a better life

better life

better lives

before getting killed.

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conclude that

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It is not possible to give equal right to animals as

humans

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humans, however

however

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

can impose some rules to stop the animal exploitation and abuse.Animal feel same pain as human to use them for selfish means is inhumane according to me

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Exploitation
Animal welfare
Ethical treatment
Vegetarianism
Veganism
Cognitive dissonance
Humane
Live stock
Cruelty-free
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Conservation
Habitat preservation
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