A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many individuals think that animals are deceived by humans because they are not given equal right as a human. Others think that animal can be used to satisfy various needs of humans. According to me, Human does not have rights to exploit animals and use them as

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slaves, however

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animals can be used in ethical ways

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this

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essay

refers to the speaker or writer

will discuss both

view points

a mental position from which things are viewed

viewpoints

and give my opinion on it

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There are several reasons why people feel that animals are exploited and should

given

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give

same rights

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the same rights

as humans.

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animals are used in labs for research for testing medicines.Labs person will

purposly

with intention; in an intentional manner

purposely

infict

impose something unpleasant

inflict

pain on animals to do

medicine

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medical

testing or just to know the reaction of animals

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monkey owl dogs main

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lab

animals to be used in labs in various countries.

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animals are kept in wire cages just to

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serve

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our plates. Most

animal

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animals

in the cages are

deaseased

caused by or altered by or manifesting disease or pathology

diseased

or dead and most

them

people in general

they

never seen

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have never seen

never saw

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the rays of the sun

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lastly animals

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used for travelling and

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an activity that is diverting and that holds the attention

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purpose which is another selfish way of using animal and abuse them.

animal

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The animal

Animal

An animal

can be used in more ethical as it is not possible for humans to live without depending on animals

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goverment

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Government

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can impose

rule

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rules

so that animals will suffer less.The nonessential use of animals can be

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stop, such

stopped such

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as in labs

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circus or zoo. In slaughter houses, people can provide

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a person trained to compete in sports

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living environment

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for

animals

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too, so

too so

that they can have

good life

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a better life

better life

better lives

before getting killed.

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conclude that

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It is not possible to give equal right to animals as

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humans, however

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goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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can impose some rules to stop the animal exploitation and abuse.Animal feel same pain as human to use them for selfish means is inhumane according to me

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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294 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Exploitation
Animal welfare
Ethical treatment
Vegetarianism
Veganism
Cognitive dissonance
Humane
Live stock
Cruelty-free
Bioethics
Conservation
Habitat preservation
Ecosystem
Biodiversity
Animal testing
Synthetic biology
Genetic engineering
Speciesism
Animal husbandry
Sustainable farming

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