Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for all types of crime. Others feel that the circumstances of an offence should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment

Our system of official rules is being improved in a great effort to limit the number of offenders.

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could a fixed punishment help

could a fixed punishment helps

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helps to reduce those who commit all types of

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? While, some are in agreement, I strongly do not feel the same way One the one hand, it could be argued that having a fixed

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for each

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is an effective way to reduce a number of offenders in certain respects. Those who support a fixed

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say that the great benefit of it is its simplicity. The fixed

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makes it easier for residents to be aware of the legal system. When people are able to exactly understand a dangerous level of their action as well as a sentence they have to accept,

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would act as

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a deterrent

for embarking on a life of

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and tackling rising

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. An illustration of

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is that the Singapore Government gives those who drop litter in public places a heavy fine under any circumstances.

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method

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truly works

has truly worked

when Singapore becomes one of the cleanest and greenest countries in the world.

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, I feel that a fixed

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is only suitable for minor illegalities and I hold the opinion that the court should consider the degree of each

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before reaching a decision on the sentence.

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, with those who are found guilty of killing a person, the judge

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to take mitigating circumstances into consideration to determine that he or she commits murder or manslaughter. Obviously, if he or she

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kills a person, the government must take strong measures to be tough on

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.

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, if

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only an unintentional motive, the lighter

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should be imposed. I believe that people deserve a

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chance and considering a criminal’s motivation certainly make a great contribution to make our legal system become fairer and more effective. When citizens have a firm belief in the correctness and humanitarian of the law, surely they enforce the law seriously To sum up,

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it is undeniable that a fixed

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is appropriate for minor crimes, it do not ensure the accuracy and

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humanely

in all circumstances.

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, I side with those who believe that the court should take a right penalty into account for each offence