Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
air
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pollution
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has become a major issue all around the world. Some people think that the main reason of
air
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pollution
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is more usage of cars. So one
day
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should be an international car free
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day which
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day, which
is the most effective method to reduce
air
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pollution but
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pollution, but
others believe that there are more others ways to reduce it.
This
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essay looks into both views with personal opinion.
To begin
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, some mortals think that an international car-free
day
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is an effective method to reduce
air
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pollution
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because nowadays more than half percentage of the public are using the private vehicles which emit the fatal gases in the
air
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. These gases are very dangerous for human health.
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, in Delhi city where roads are very congested due to driving the cars effect to the environment. For
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, in that city, the temperature is always high and there is no fresh or clean
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to breath. If one
day
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will be free from cars, there could be kept
air
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fresh to some extent. On the other side, others people think that
air
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pollution
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could be reduced by using the others effective methods.
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, people use
air
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conditioner which
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effect to the
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.
As a result
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, there can be seen unbalance in the outskirts like to reduce the rain. So, these constructions should be so far away from human
habitant
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
. I believe that, only one
day
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banned the usage of cars not solution for reducing the
air
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pollution
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. To sum up,
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excessive usage of cars
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responsible for
air
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pollution
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, but we cannot ignore the other factors which pollute to the
air
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like industries, factories. So government should make rules and regulations to control the threats which effect to human life.
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