Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.
In
this
era of youth empowerment a child
should be given considerable amount of
freedom in what they eatSuggestion
given a considerable amount of
,
what they wearAccept space
,
,
what they watch but within a Accept space
,
boundation
.
By Accept space
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perfoming
it a the performance of a part or role in a drama
performing
child
can become self - reliable and self - confident .
To make Accept space
.
apropriate
decisionssuitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
,
to know what they are and to achieve success children Accept space
,
are required
to take independent decisions starting from the basic till a crucial one but under the supervision and guidance of the eldersSuggestion
is required
.
Accept space
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ounce
a Suggestion
Once
Ounce
child
is grown up we cannot force him or her to do as what parents want them to do because it will make a child
feel dejected and uncomfortable and can easily get irritated. We ,
as a Accept space
,
parents
should make positive environment for them to grow and to tell them about the pro’s and con’s of things and let the Suggestion
parent
child
take decision
after looking at both the aspectsSuggestion
a decision
.
Taking decisions by Accept space
.
there
own will not develop the habit of selfishness until and unless the of them or themselves
their
guidence
of parents are correctsomething that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
guidance
,
motivatingAccept space
,
,
inspiringAccept space
,
.
A person should make decisions by his Accept space
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own so
that he or she can realise their mistakes on time and will not repeat them in futureAccept comma addition
own, so
.
By making own decisions a person can learn to value things and respect them. As we know that excess of everything is Accept space
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bad
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bad, hence
hence
giving too much freedom to children along with not making any schedule or teaching values to children is very dangerous for the child
’s future .
Accept space
.
if
the food is harmful for the health of the Suggestion
If
child
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child, then
then
it should be probibed
from the question or examine thoroughly and closely
probed
child
by teaching him the harms that are caused by it ,
if a Accept space
,
child
is watching a violence or adult show then
he should be avoid
watching it as it is not good for the Suggestion
avoided
avoiding
developing
of his brainSuggestion
development
.
Accept space
.
summing
up a Suggestion
Summing
child
should be allowed to choose what ever
he or she wants to eat or one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
watch but
a Accept comma addition
watch, but
child
should be aware of the harms of the product hence
he will automatically shift to good food and serials .
Accept space
.
confidence
and self moral can only be increased if a Suggestion
Confidence
chid
is taking his decisions a young person of either sex
child
by
his own with proper values and principleSuggestion
of
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