Every government has a duty to provide free health care for its people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of government providing free healthcare?

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Currently, people all around the world have faced
wih
expresses the means used
with
the
sirious
concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
epidemic which is called Covid-19.
Citizents
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Citizens
are received
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are receiving
receive
free
health
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care
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from their
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
.
This
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can have both positive and negative. On the one hand, supporting free
health
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care
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is
benificial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for
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in
some way.
Fistly
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Firstly
, one of the main
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
is that all
citizent
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
has
accessed
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access
to the same quality of
care
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and
tratments
care provided to improve a situation (especially medical procedures or applications that are intended to relieve illness or injury)
treatment
treatments
especially poor people.
Medical
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Medicine
services and treatments are quite
costy
entailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
cosy
with people. In fact, expensive
health
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care
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cost being from
priscription
directions prescribed beforehand; the action of prescribing authoritative rules or directions
prescription
charges and treatment cost
prevent
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prevents
a great number of these people from meeting doctors to treat minor disease for a long time and their
health
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certaintly
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
be worse.
Secondly
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, the
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
can
controll
power to direct or determine
control
the spread
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
illness and
diagnoze
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diagnosis
diagnose
diagnosed
diagnoses
at the initial
llevel
a position on a scale of intensity or amount or quality
level
.
For example
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,
thousand
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thousands
of people were kept away
citizents
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
area and
then
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were
took
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taken
taking
to take
care
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of by doctors, nurses, and
miliary
of or relating to the study of the principles of warfare
military
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
. After a short- strict time, patients who were
attack
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attacked
by
viruts
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the virus
virus
a virus
fruits
viruses
have been got rid of
disease
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the disease
.
On the other hand
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, there are some disadvantages of free medical services and treatments. The
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
invested the amount of money for supporting their
citizents
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
,
there for
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
therefor
, the budget is nearly scarcity. It
make
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makes
an
appoitment
the act of putting a person into a non-elective position
appointment
effect to another field that need to be supplied
such
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as education, foreign-
econonmical
using the minimum of time or resources necessary for effectiveness
economical
or culture. Another problem is that the lack of doctors, trained nurses can have a detrimental effect on the quality of medical centres frequently overload with patients. It means that doctor
meet
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has met
is meeting
and take
care
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of many cases continually. It is hard to focus on one
persone
a human being
person
.
Additionally
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, medical
staffs must
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staffs, must
have to work long time and nurse a large number of people. In
conclution
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, free
health
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care
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has both advantages and disadvantages. National authority should motivate
benificals
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
in
effectively
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effective
ways.
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