Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Library
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is
a
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very essential for every people. Indeed, It is a knowledge store. From ancient
time
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times
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students
use
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have used
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library
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the library
a library
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for various
purpose
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purposes
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. But modern
technology
brings us more facilities
in
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on
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library
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the library
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side. Here I give some
reason
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reasons
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why agree with
this
topic. At
first,
I
believe
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that
technology
made our
life
easy in every position. We can
to
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apply
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do something easily
by
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with
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technology
. Every year many
library
business
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businesses
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man and educational institutions spend more
money
for
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on
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libraries
and they include
technology
on
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in
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their
library
If
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So
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the
students
and all
classes
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the classes
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people can feel
relax
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relaxed
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and comfortable. But
i
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I
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think that it is just
waste
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a waste
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. I think that spending
money
on
library
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the library
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does
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is
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not necessary. Because
,
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many
students
does
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do
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not
likes
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like
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to visit a
library
. They feel bored and uncomfortable. Many
students
claim that most
of
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libraries
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the libraries
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has
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old book and their services system does not well.
As a
result
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result,
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students
use
technology
like as
internet
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Internet
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and they get all
information
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their information
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from
this
side.
For example
,
few
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a few
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days ago my friend went to
library
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the library
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for
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to
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buy some lattes and old books. But unfortunately, he just got one book from all
library
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libraries
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like
as
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popy
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Popey Library
library
, central
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and Central
library
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Library
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. He thought that, every year
librarian
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librarians
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business man spend
money
for
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on
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decoration
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the decoration
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their
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of their
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library
but they have not
collected
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old books and other important belongings.
On the contrary
, I believe that
technology
will
be plays
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play
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an
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a
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vital role
on
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in
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replacing
library
function
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functions
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. At present twenty centuries
technology
made our
life
more easy
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easier
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. We get various information from
technology
such
as
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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. I believe that only
technology
suitable
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is suitable
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for replacing
library
function
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functions
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.
For example
,
at
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in
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present
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the present
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era
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era,
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many
students
can
use
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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and they
reads
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read
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by
internet
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which one essential for their academic study.
Moreover
,
students
get more and more
idea
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ideas
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about their
study
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studies
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from
technology
help.
In addition
, every day we can
use
technology
and
can
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apply
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search on
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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. For that reason, when we need
any thing
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anything
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we get help from
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the internet
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internet
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Internet
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from old information to new
update
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updates
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.
Furthermore
, many people
does
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do
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not want to spend their time
on
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in
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library
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the library
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they want
short
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apply
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cut
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a
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method.
As a
result
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they
use
technology
where they can easily
done
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do
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their work.
On the other hand
, I think that spending
money
on
libraries
is not
waste
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a waste
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. But it brings us more help.
For instance
, many
libraries
does
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do
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not have
proper
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a proper
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chair. table , cc camera and all kinds of books. Which one very essential for all customers
.
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I think that spending
money
on
libraries
is not
waste
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a waste
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but it
is make
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makes
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our daily communication strong and easy.
To conclude
, spending
money
on
library
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the library
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and new
technology
both are essential
our
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to our
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life
. I think that
library
and
technology
both are
best
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the best
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in our
life
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