Some people think that the amount of money spent on library is a waste as a new technologies are developing and replacing library functions. Do you agree or disagree?
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The library
a
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apply
time
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times
students
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have used
library
for various Add an article
the library
a library
purpose
. But modern Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
technology
brings us more facilities in
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on
library
side. Here I give some Correct article usage
the library
reason
why agree with Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
this
topic. At first,
I believe
that Wrong verb form
believed
technology
made our life
easy in every position. We can to
do something easilyChange the verb form
apply
by
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with
technology
. Every year many library
business
man and educational institutions spend more Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
money
for
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on
libraries
and they include technology
on
their Change preposition
in
library
If
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students
and all classes
people can feel Correct article usage
the classes
relax
and comfortable. But Wrong verb form
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i
think that it is just Change the capitalization
I
waste
. I think that spending Correct article usage
a waste
money
on library
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the library
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,
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students
does
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do
likes
to visit a Change the verb form
like
library
. They feel bored and uncomfortable. Many students
claim that most of
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libraries
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the libraries
has
old book and their services system does not well. Change the verb form
have
As a
result
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result,
students
use
technology
like as internet
and they get all Capitalize word
Internet
information
from Correct pronoun usage
their information
this
side. For example
, few
days ago my friend went to Change the article
a few
library
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the library
for
buy some lattes and old books. But unfortunately, he just got one book from all Change preposition
to
library
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libraries
as
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popy
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Popey Library
library
, central
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and Central
library
. He thought that, every year Capitalize word
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librarian
business man spend Fix the agreement mistake
librarians
money
for
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on
decoration
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the decoration
their
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of their
library
but they have not collected
old books and other important belongings. Wrong verb form
collect
On the contrary
, I believe that technology
will be plays
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play
an
vital role Change the article
a
on
replacing Change preposition
in
library
function
. At present twenty centuries Fix the agreement mistake
functions
technology
made our life
more easy
. We get various information from Replace the words
easier
technology
such
as Add an article
the internet
internet
. I believe that only Capitalize word
Internet
technology
suitable
for replacing Add a missing verb
is suitable
library
function
. Fix the agreement mistake
functions
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, at
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in
present
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the present
era
many Add a comma
era,
students
can use
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the internet
internet
and they Capitalize word
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reads
by Change the verb form
read
internet
which one essential for their academic study. Capitalize word
Internet
Moreover
, students
get more and more idea
about their Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
study
from Fix the agreement mistake
studies
technology
help. In addition
, every day we can use
technology
and can
search on Verb problem
apply
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the internet
internet
. For that reason, when we need Capitalize word
Internet
any thing
we get help from Correct your spelling
anything
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the internet
internet
from old information to new Capitalize word
Internet
update
. Fix the agreement mistake
updates
Furthermore
, many people does
not want to spend their time Change the verb form
do
on
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in
library
they want Correct article usage
the library
short
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apply
cut
method. Correct your spelling
a
As a
result
they Add a comma
result,
use
technology
where they can easily done
their work. Change the verb form
do
On the other hand
, I think that spending money
on libraries
is not waste
. But it brings us more help. Correct article usage
a waste
For instance
, many libraries
does
not have Change the verb form
do
proper
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a proper
the proper
.
I think that spending Change the punctuation
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money
on libraries
is not waste
but it Correct article usage
a waste
is make
our daily communication strong and easy. Wrong verb form
makes
To conclude
, spending money
on library
and new Correct article usage
the library
technology
both are essential our
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to our
life
. I think that library
and technology
both are best
in our Correct article usage
the best
life
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